Poetry Review of Kissing the Ikons by Alinda Wasner

Kissing the Ikons by Alinda Dickinson Wasner

Alinda Wasner writes like no other contemporary poet.  Her voice is unique, powerful and evocative and her lines dwell in the physical while channeling the metaphysical.  She often writes of common things, but depicting them viscerally, as if they had lives of their own.  The result is an emotional boiling-over that leaves us a sloppy mess, like we have just finished canning tomatoes, not reading poetry.

Wasner primarily uses visual imagery, but not exclusively.  In one example of the aural, she finds her experience of things so interchangeable that when she writes, in Small Craft Warnings,

“Just outside the small cove of your room/the boats toss in their slips/cables clanging/like chimes in the window…”

a reader can’t be certain if she’s really comparing boats to chimes or implying the opposite.  Here, she also has poems with the smell of mint leaves being crushed underfoot, the taste of pomegranate juice spilled from freshly pressed seeds, and autumn Aspens, not dropping their leaves, but hurling their silver coins, Judas-like.

In Love, Was It? she plays with sonics deftly, including internal rhyme, in this medley:

“Love, was it under the lemon tree/The first time our eyes met/The wind quivering along the spines of the tall grass?//Or, was it by the river/The first time our palms touched/The sun red on wild waters?//Love, was it under the street lamp/The first time your lips salted mine like margaritas/The moon over your shoulder a gold medallion?”

And damned if I can’t see a tequila bottle bearing that medallion when I’m through reading this.

But the tone of her work can change in an instant, and readers should never assume to  know where her work might be going, as you’ll see toward the end of this same poem:

“Love, was it by the water/The first time your silence stung me/The sand a cauldron-cloud of chaos?//Or, Love, was it deep in the forest/The first time you turned your back on me/The wind pulling the curtain of night across the horizon?

In this collection, Wasner’s poems span her life from childhood to grandparenthood and everything along the way.  They contain raw emotions, joy as well as pain, reflecting life as it can be found in most places, but described in ways that seldom occur to the busy observer.

I’ve had the privilege of knowing Alinda for the past several years and I’ve read several of these pieces as first drafts, watching them evolve to their present form.  I would encourage you to meet her, through this beautiful book, and as I did, add her to your short list of favorite poets.

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Pixar’s Rules for Storytelling 7 – Come up with your ending before you figure out your middle. Seriously. Endings are hard, get yours working up front.

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Rule #7: Come up with your ending before you figure out your middle. Seriously. Endings are hard, get yours working up front.

A good outline lays the foundation for a story that honors the core of this rule: you must know your ending of your story so that you can be sure to support that ending with a well-structured beginning and middle.

Vonnegut, too, knew what he was talking about when he said “Give your readers as much information as possible as soon as possible… Readers should have such complete understanding of what is going on, where and why, that they could finish the story themselves, should cockroaches eat the last few pages.”

Pixar’s Rules for Storytelling 6 – What is your character good at, comfortable with? Throw the polar opposite at them.

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Rule #6: What is your character good at, comfortable with? Throw the polar opposite at them. Challenge them. How do they deal?

Meet my cat, Burrito, which I received as a gift from my caring girlfriend (now wife). I wasn’t expecting to own a cat. I had a certain lifestyle, with a set routine, and established boundaries. How did I handle this change? Watch and find out.

I get naked with this book! A review of The Cost of Living (a novel) by Rob Roberge

The Cost of Living will easily make my top 10 of 2013 list.

I’ve read all of Roberge’s work, all that I’m aware of (Drive [novel], More than they Could Chew [novel], Working Backwards from the Worst Moment of My Life [stories]) and I’d read anything else in the future. He’s one of my favorite writers, so you know, having the history I do, you can trust my words.

To read The Cost of Living is to read the rock and roll story that everyone’s always wanted, but could never find; there’s too much glitter and groupies, too much ego in other rock and roll stories. With The Cost of Living, you’re forced to deal with, and ultimately fall in love with, a life that’s been destroyed by the stage. Every rock and roll story you’ve read before will seem cliche compared to The Cost of Living.

P.S: I promise my praise has nothing to do with the fact that Roberge blurbed my novel, Stranger Will. I was a fan of his way before he read my book.

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Pixar’s Rules for Storytelling 5 – Simplify. Focus. Combine characters. Hop over detours. You’ll feel like you’re losing valuable stuff but it sets you free.


Yes, I am going to make a video for each of the Pixar’s 22 Rules for Storytelling (the full list can be found here). Be sure to subscribe to this channel to not miss any of the forthcoming videos. I plan to release one/week.

Rule #5: Simplify. Focus. Combine characters. Hop over detours. You’ll feel like you’re losing valuable stuff but it sets you free.

There are two classic pieces of writing advice that support this storytelling rule:

The first, from William Faulkner, author of The Sound and the Fury, Absalom, Absalom!, goes: “In writing, you must kill all your darlings.” meaning you must get rid of those elements of your story that serve your ego rather than the story.

The second, from Anton Chekhov, author of countless stories, plays, and novellas, goes: “One must not put a loaded rifle on the stage if no one is thinking of firing it.” Translation: again, only include things that have a purpose.

The message is to always question why elements of your story exist.